Friday, May 15, 2009

Blog Stage 8: Comment #2

I completely agree with you Erik. Having and abortion is a difficult and very personal decision, and should remain a personal decision, not a political one.

When I hear pro-life activists telling me how precious each and every life is, I wonder what we’re supposed to do with already overpopulated and under-funded child care services.

Your article was well written and I could follow your train of thought fairly well, but I do have one suggestion: splitting up the article into different paragraphs would make it much easier to read.

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